Rock Cycle and Plate Tectonics

12/12/2011

Hello! Feel free to post comments and questions that you have about my website.
Please DO NOT write inappropriate comments or questions.
Thank you

- Conan

7 Comments

Greg Heffley

12/12/2011 05:33:38 am

I like your website but you have to work on some punctuation, for example the mantle there is some comma's in places you don't need to. And make sure when you put something you don't put it twice Eg.) Upper Mantle,Lower Mantle,Upper Mantle,Lower Mantle. But overall really good website!

Ammit the Devourer

12/12/2011 05:37:38 am

Hello Conan! I really like your website! You put the information in your own words, an it was very nice. Remember to add comas when needed, and subject verb agreement is a must! But overall you did a great job! Keep up the good work!

sandy squirrel

12/12/2011 12:21:07 pm

Hi Conan, For your "Rock Cycle" page I have noticed that you do need to work on your spelling and grammar, always remember to read it over again because we all sometimes rush in the process that we do not get a chance to read it again. Also it is very important that you get the main points for example: when you were mentioning how the rock can become into this and that, you can say it once and I think that it might be enough if you write ect.

For the "Plate Tectonics" page, I feel as though you are lacking the details that are required...like when you spoke about Wegener you have to keep on talking about him, you cannot just mention him and say that there are 7 plates because then I feel as though from the audiences point of view they might be confused too. Also always remember Grammar, Grammar, Grammar! You do need to work on some minor mistakes but all in all you did a great job, and remember these are just suggestions! :D

Pooh Bear

12/12/2011 12:38:00 pm

Hi Conan! For the rock cycle part I think you need to work on your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. I suggest to maybe go over it with a friend or family member. I thought it was great that you used transition words.
I think you have worked really hard on your website though.
Keep it up!:)

Pooh Bear

12/12/2011 12:45:03 pm

You did an awesome job on the Plate Tectonics section of your website. You talked about the founder of plate tectonics alot, but I suggest to add a little bit more clear information on the actual theory of plate tectonics. Other than that you did a wonderful job on that section!

Tony Hawk

12/12/2011 01:08:48 pm

HEY i like your website! i like ur video on the theory of plate tectonics:) right now i see no errors great job! keep up the hard work!

Mr. Hong

12/13/2011 02:05:47 pm

@ Sandy - You are doing a great job giving feedback to your classmates! Keep up the good work!

@ Conan - Please check your spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.

- Your bibliography is empty.
- Use the same font for all your pages. Make sure the font you use for your content is not bigger than your menu button font.

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