Types of Rocks

1/4/2012

Hello! Feel free to post comments or question about 'Igneous', 'Sedimentary', and 'Metamorphic' rock sections. You can blog about how should I improve this section. Also, please write something that I need to work on. Please DO NOT write inappropriate comments or questions.
Thank You

-Conan

3 Comments

sandy squirrel

1/4/2012 12:12:00 pm

Hi Conan!

Grammar-
The last sentence does not have proper grammar, for your Metamorphic Rock page.

Information-
For the information, I feel it was done very well and it needs to have just a little more information added, (if possible).

Spelling-
For your spelling, there was not a single mistake!!!

Capitals-
For the Igneous rock page, you should really capitalize all of the names of different rock.

Information-
Good information, although it seems like you have not put it into your own words.

Great job overall!!!! :D

Greg Heffley

1/4/2012 01:52:53 pm

Media:

Igneous: On your igneous page you had 4 good examples of igneous rocks! But you may want to add a video. On you’re extrusive section I liked your pictures but you may want to add a video. On your intrusive section I liked you pictures but you may want to add a video.

Metamorphic: I liked your picture but you may want something that shows a example of a metamorphic rock because I found it hard to see the metamorphic rock because I thought it was just a beach.

Sedimentary: I really liked your pictures! And same with fossils section, your cementation is sort of confusing so you may want to switch it, on your compaction section you may want to add a picture. But none of those sections had a video so you may want to add a video.

Information:

Igneous: You had plenty of information and I really liked it!

Metamorphic: I liked your information but you may want to add more.

Sedimentary: I like your information and the definition but you may want to add more.

Spelling:

Igneous: All proper spelling.

Metamorphic: All proper spelling.

Sedimentary: All proper spelling.

Grammar:

Igneous: All proper grammar

Metamorphic: All proper grammar

Sedimentary: Not sediments, sediment, sediment is bits of rocks etc.. it’s subject verb
agreement not is are because it’s plural.

Punctuation:

Igneous: Proper punctuation.

Metamorphic: You don’t have to put “ “ around change.

Sedimentary: Proper punctuation.

Pooh Bear

1/4/2012 11:40:14 pm

METAMORPHIC ROCK

Grammar-
On the first sentence there was mistake, other than that it was great!

Information-
It felt to me there wasn't enough.

Spelling-
No errors.

Capitals-
No errors.

Punctuation-
No errors.

Media-
Great image! But there wasn't any video.

IGNEOUS ROCK

Grammar-
At the beginning it didn't really make sense, but other than that it was perfect!

Information-
There was an average amount of info. But still more than the other pages, which was awesome!

Spelling-
No errors.

Capitals-
No errors.

Punctuation-
No errors.

Media-
Everything was great, except the top image wasn't relevant and the pictures at the bottom felt to me to much. Also i couldn't find any video.

SEDIMENTARY ROCK

Grammar-
Not to many errors. But it was great!

Information-
Not enough, next time be more detailed.

Spelling-
No errors.

Capitals-
No errors.

Punctuation-
No errors.

Media-
Great pictures! But one is enough. And I didn't find any video.

All in all you did a fantastic job but remember to add a video to all of those pages!! :D

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